I wonder if brni is a comic book fan. Through the last six years, there've come onto the scene a number of comics that don't follow the usual formula of "hero fooled by villiain, villain almost achieves the goal of the week, hero manages a miraculous save right at the buzzer." There are comics like "Powers," just to name one of the sparkling examples of a tale that examines the social and legal ramifications of a world where the gods fly above our very streets and wear their underwear on the outside.
f'r'nstance - More description of the battle where the dragon flames missed the k'niggit and burnt a still smoking hole in the ground - The village or king's court where the little bitty farmer is dealing with hizzoner who happens to be the uncle of aforementioned k'niggit (where a witness for the farmer is Big Scaley. - an illusration of the difference in wealth between and so forth
A little too complex for a quick comedy song. Although the wealth differences actually are part of the point of the song -- I think I imply that the sale of the knight's suit of armor will pay not only for the restoration of a hut and a forty-seven-acre farm and new animals, but also a wedding....
Good day, sir. It's taken me some year.25 to get around to it, but I've finally put Suit of Armor to prose. If you are interested, Than A Peasant Scorned is posted with attribution at http://brni.livejournal.com/307407.html
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Date: 2007-01-04 04:03 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2007-01-04 07:15 am (UTC)Gotta love THAT concept! and having a sheepdog like that dragon in the flock every night, well, the mind boggles...
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Date: 2007-01-04 12:37 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-01-04 02:53 pm (UTC)I like this one
Date: 2007-01-04 03:46 pm (UTC)I wish you had gone farther with it.
f'r'nstance
- More description of the battle where the dragon flames missed the k'niggit and burnt a still smoking hole in the ground
- The village or king's court where the little bitty farmer is dealing with hizzoner who happens to be the uncle of aforementioned k'niggit (where a witness for the farmer is Big Scaley.
- an illusration of the difference in wealth between and so forth
But really. I like this one.
Re: I like this one
Date: 2007-01-04 03:58 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-01-04 06:21 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-01-04 07:01 pm (UTC)a day late a dollar poorer
Date: 2008-04-20 06:29 pm (UTC)Good day, sir. It's taken me some year.25 to get around to it, but I've finally put Suit of Armor to prose. If you are interested, Than A Peasant Scorned is posted with attribution at http://brni.livejournal.com/307407.html